3 December 2008, 2:36 pm
Okay so we had this little vocab thing where we had words and we had to put it in paragraph form. Can you read it and made sure i used the words right and check for any spelling/ punctuation errors. Thanks! I will pay back the favor. He starred at her with an incredulous look on his face. She was…absolutely gorgeous. Her lithe body seemed to dance as she gracefully glided along the lunchroom floor. Who was she? Why had he never noticed her? The unknown girl greeted her friends and comfortably sat down. That’s when he realized he had no chance. His face contorted in contempt of himself. Who was he kidding? He was just a vagabond wondering from clique to clique in the jungle they call school. Now, he sat alone; not a single friend in sight. Suddenly, she turned around and looked straight at him His face dissembled to hide the feelings of his love bereft soul. He had already been rejected numerous times before and he was not sure he could handle anymore. Slowly, he looked up at her face. Her expression was bemusing and said, “Why are you starring at me?”. Sparks of chemistry began to fly faster than embers at a camp bonfire. The world around seemed to stop and he continued to stare shamelessly. Of course a bunch of mammoth sized football players had to come in and cause a squall by throwing the new porcelain plates on the floor. With every crash went the taxpayer’s money not to mention this had completely ruined the moment. It also caused people to start throwing food at the enormous athletes to make them stop. Now, a small food war was happening among the plate destroyers. He watched as the haughty boy, who had proclaimed to the world that the plate smashing was his idea, walked over and kissed the girl. Reality hit him in the form of “apple surprise”. How could he have thought that the beautiful girl would not have a boyfriend? His thought became insidious as he glared at the jock. If only he had one chance to break that kids’ nose. Brad saw him starring at his girlfriend and glowered at him. Who was this kid? Didn’t he know that she was taken? Brad plopped down in the seat next to his girlfriend and began to contemplate. He began to think about his brilliant idea to break up the starring party, but a quick glance up broke the thought. She was fair-haired and perfect. He cherished her with his life although he did not often show it. Their relationship was silent yet sweet and it could easily surpass Bella and Edward’s love from that book Twilight she was always telling him about. However, Brad was not going to let some impudent boy compete with him. He wanted to plunder the boys’ house and take anything of value from him, but his prudent nature would not allow him. If the boy decided to make a move though, he would not let his usually just personality stand in his way. Just then, the unknown boy marched up the table with an air of valor and started to talk his girlfriend, Avery. Josh, the alien boy, looked as if he was a hostage about to battle his capturer and determined to come out alive. Brad’s breathing became ragged and his mind raced to find an action to answer the situation. He glimpsed down at his brazen ring, drew his arm back, and punched the foolish, naive boy straight in the face.... Read More »
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